two dog day i and ii

Yesterday I wrote this, based on something that had just happened:

two dog day

we have now dixon the dog
and cookie the cat
and misty the mutant
who plays a cat on tv

six years ago there was a dog named bill
and i thought of him today
because i said to dixon “you are a good/pooch/dog”
exactly the way i used to say it to bill

and i got a chill and a fear that i had betrayed bill
because once i said it only to him
and i had a new pang of loss
but it quickly unpanged and warmed

because i wouldn’t have said “you are a good/pooch/dog”
if i didn’t miss bill
irreplaceable bill
with the waggy tail

and i have missed saying “you are a good/pooch/dog”
and it is good to say it again to a worthy dog
and the things i did with bill remain intact
and bill will always want me to have fun

It got a good reception on Facebook, but I felt there was more to be said, so today I did this:

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The words to the triple acrostic:

The spirit of Good Dogs will serve us in need
Whenever we’re hurting or face a rough sea
Of heart they have given unfailingly

2 comments
  1. Madeleine Sinclair said:
    Madeleine Sinclair's avatar

    Touched my heart… and beyond. Thank you for both the words and the insider drawing.

    • onewithclay's avatar

      Maddy, thank you so much. So glad you feel that way. I fondly remember your performances in the Valley, including the arrow in King Harold’s eye. [smile] I so hope to catch your one-woman-show before too much time has passed!

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