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summa: highest.

where: location.

summa where

syncopation steals the show

understanding helps us though

making waves from there to here

molding vision not to veer

apex when we persevere

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Afterword: I continue to struggle to regain my footing, both with drawing and with acrostic poetry composition. The late comic-book writer Denny O’Neil wrote a feature in some comics called “From the Den” and he always ended the column with the fine two-word mantra “Perseverance furthers.” Here’s to that sentiment, and to Mr. O’Neil’s spirit.

bless the children and protect them

and curse who practices pædophilia

deliver the innocent from such a demon

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banish to prison or to mausoleum

all enablers of the killers of innocence

denounce and punish such vermin

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build healthy nests for tomorrow

restore trust in media

instill decency

generate utopian

homes and forego

totalitarian sorrow

My phone’s Camera has photoediting tools and among them is a nifty enhancer called Portrait Blur. It sharpens the focus on the focal point you choose and the further away from the focal point you get the more automatic blurring takes place.

This gave me an idea for an acrostic poem. Since the word Portrait has eight letters, and Blur has four, my acrostic could have four couplets, and the end-rhyme words would have their last letters be the B, L, U and R of Blur. The illustration would be a switcheroo, with the background in shap focus and the face, the Portrait part, all blurry.

Then my thoughts jumped to the notion of adding the word Self, creating a triple acrostic with Portrait in the middle and Self and Blur as bookends. I might then create a blurry self-portrait and have in the background a still Life with a few of my ceramic birds (I have made dozens) in sharp focus. This would yield the nice possibility of it becoming a psychological self-portrait, with the quirky birds as my alter egos.

So here we are in the blissful throes of creation, with a firm foundation for a work of art and a long way to go to reach fruition. One of the phrases I will tag this post with is “creative process.”

If you look at the attached photo you’ll see a placeholder drawing of cotton swabs, which I use to blend pencil marks for shading and will be handy for blurring as well, and a layout of the Self Portrait Blur acrostic with subject-to-change end rhyme words drab, lab, quail, derail,lieu, caribou, sector, and nectar. If I am a sufficiently nimble wordsmith the resulting poem will have a consistent meter and a theme related to “Self-Portrait Blur,” and when read out loud will not seam like an acrostic at all. My confidence that I will be able to do this is sky-high, because in the last eighteen years I have done it hundreds of times.

In the commissary where I work, one priority is Speed. The restaurants want their prepared food, and they want it pronto. They will take Pretty Fast over Pretty every time.

This page is like that. I just had to get it done, and polishing it up would have cost me hours. Other pages will demand finesse; this one does not.

If Need Be

In a tough entangling web

It’s a time when your hopes ebb

Fear and hopelessness presage

Finding rescue–Draw that page

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This Time

Take a number mon petit

Halve it with your bread and ghi

Infinitely numbers teem

Setting pace and mood and theme

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Lean On Me

Let’s help each other grow and bloom

Engaging in opposing doom

And new horizons come to be

No nastiness that we can see

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In the word balloons:

He: We NEED this…

She: …and it is Nice.

She: Tea & Ghi time!

He: …the Tripod…

She: …is mightier than the Stick.

He: Now let’s go…

She: .walking uphill…

They: …into the glorious sunset.

Sun: Crazy kids!

Here is a syrupy, sappy, cartoony glimpse at romantic love. Cupid fires a barrage of love-arrows at a couple who is already kissing. Cupid gets undeserved bragging rights because the love was already there. What a devious creep Cupid can be!

true LOVE real

there’s a sleevéd heart to wear

romance comes for two to share

ultra-laved in buttered shea

eh, laissez entrer le Soleil

I don’t know what Shea Butter is, but it must be good stuff, judging from all the advertising, so I laved. Mostly I needed to rhyme a word ending with A and a word ending in L.

The last line roughly translates from the French as “What the Hell, let the sunshine in.” Cheers!

Change a month & catch a Thrill/Sketch a drooping Daffodil/Plan some stuff you never do/Don’t be scared–it’s only New

Monthly Renewal

My O my, the Calendar has flipp’d a fresh page over

Out goes August; in September; cooling may ensue

Nonetheless the night sky now includes a blown-up Nova, ‘n

There in Horsehead Nebula some brand new stars are due

Here on Earth’s September we obey unwritten law

Let the lightning flash & thunder growl with sis boom ba

Yay for fresh new months that well reward our wherewithal

Menagerie

Making friends again with clay

Efferversced your mood today

Notwithstanding sky-so-gray–

Amplified that riff-strewn sound;

Gotten butterflies astound

Everyone with what you’ve found.

Raise a glass to absent friends.

Iridescent dusk descends

East to west where rainbow wends.