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Morning Borning

My Spring Training / MLB

Optimizes Hope; lets see. O

Razzmatazz gives DOOM what for

Near-misses send it off with scorn

If circus tents provide a ring I

Netlessly make gaspers keen

Gained wisdom makes the harpers sing

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Toe Tag

Ta-ta resort

O faulty aorta

Enigmas a-courting

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Customer Feedback

Comfort meager; value half

Usher like a stoned giraffe

Service pure crap ร  la mode

Tidiness? A wreck untowed

Oversight done by a slob

Managed by a doornail’s knob. A

Euphemism played trรจs chic

Refundable ’round Tuesday week

This morning I retrieved an unused sketchpad from upstairs and began a new page. There were three different-sized things on the dining room table and I used them to make three circles on the page. I sketched face in the uppermost circle intending to draw a world-weary author, female; it evolved into what looks like a slightly feminized version of Roy Thomas of comic-book legend.

At this writing I’ve surrounded the circles with three acrostic poem spines, “Morning Borning,” “Toe Tag” and “Customer Feedback.” Some dark grittiness seems to flavor the draft of “Toe Tag.” (I’ve just finished the ultraviolent and remarkable Cruddy by Lynda Barry, and just watched the quite-violent In a Lonely Place starring Humphrey Bogart. Cruddy paints a gritty, dark picture of a young person’s dysfunctional life; In a Lonely Place paints a gritty, dark picture of a talented, sought-after writer with a maniacal temper. Both were well worth experiencing but at intervals flat-out unenjoyable.)

I will probably try to finish this page as soon as I can and then move on to a new one, more simple, less busy, less dark.

My sweet cohabitant Donna has prepared a bowl of strawberries topped with blueberries and placed it near the rocking chair where I toil, with the red corpuscular cushion supporting my lower back, to bring my dual-acrostic illustrated poem to completion.

This is a moment created by the break Donna created when she said, “Would you like some strawberries?” and I replied, “Yes, I would. Thank you!” It is a welcome interruption worthy of capture, a delicious sliver of the day.

Late this evening I completed a draft of the two acrostic poems on this page. I also embellished the textual elements and did more drawing within the two half-moons.

King& Queen

Kumquats @ a Bโ€ขBโ€ขQ

If you mist it — c’est perdu

Now sweet breezes intervene

Getting shut of airs obscene

& reventing shit up spleen

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Mana Wife

Many woes beset us now

As our land resists the plow. I

Need you, dear. Help me un-oaf

As we ask our soles to Loafe

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These are drafts. More stages coming soon!

Captured 21 July 2026

Day after day I’ve told my sweetheart Donna, “I have got to draw today.” And yet I didn’t and didn’t.

Today is different. Marvelously so. I have the above Work In Progress well under way, and pleasant surprises abound with it, and I have high hopes for it. The “King& Queen” acrostic’s rhyme scheme has been solved, rhyming BBQ with C’est Perdu (schoolboy French to the rescue again!) and the first line establishes a bizarre matchup.

Much needs to begin, but as Mary Poppins tells us, “Well Begun is Half Done.”

Cheers, my friends!!

I hadn’t done an acrostic poem in a long time, so when I unearthed an old sketchbook with the beginnings of an acrostic page on it, I wondered if I still had the knack. So I spent the last hour filling the space between PASTE and BOARD, Putting images in the cards I’d drawn in 2023, and signing, dating and photo editing the page.

It rhymes, it scans metrically, but it is vague near-gibberish–OR it is the bare bones of an ingenious Murder Mystery that the reader is invited to concoct. Time will tell. ๐Ÿ™‚

Paste Board

Panty-waisted son of Job

Add a crime–away we go

Solve a mystery–so far a

Traitor tater stole a Gar

El Segundo, take a Card

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boom x 3

butter is

oleaginous

oleo is

mucilaginous

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bartholomew in the zoom

outlasted his confreres

or orchestrated doom

made ripostes after parries

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bindlestiffs are difficult to find

of late the backpack is the better lugg

obtaining one takes mere goodwill of mind

make camp make peace make everloving hugg

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Hayy Youu

Henrietta had a haystack on which she sat haughty

Alexeev Awestruck aimed a notion nice&naughty–o

Yarrowstalks revealed nothing telling minds nor menu

Yet yesterlings said Yes to yield an alphabetic Gen U

summa: highest.

where: location.

summa where

syncopation steals the show

understanding helps us though

making waves from there to here

molding vision not to veer

apex when we persevere

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Afterword: I continue to struggle to regain my footing, both with drawing and with acrostic poetry composition. The late comic-book writer Denny O’Neil wrote a feature in some comics called “From the Den” and he always ended the column with the fine two-word mantra “Perseverance furthers.” Here’s to that sentiment, and to Mr. O’Neil’s spirit.