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Hard to get is Pierrette; less so is Pierrot
Enterprises roll the dice and change the status quo
In the red await the seeds for placement in the loam
Ripened, swollen, injured, with stigmata or with stoma
Less-than-purists come along and…à chacun son goût
Ouch the horse that you rode in on OUCH your puppy too
Obsolescing Nature’s way creates a North untrue
Modify perfection and you miss a rendezvous

What Heirloom Tomatoes are, and why this is therefore a polemic against genetic modification, is left for the reader to explore.

Unfurled, it is your private shield, protection on a pole

Much needed in a downpour or to give Romance some Soul

Bestow a small one on a drink & let the good times roll

Regardless of how much you’ve had, you’re gonna want Samoa

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That last-word Punchline Pun owes something to my college days in Tucson in the mid-Seventies, and a TV commercial for a Pacific Islands restaurant called Kon-Tiki. They had a Big-Kahuna-type guy say stuff like “Little Chief LIKE Kon-Tiki!” in a fake Polynesian accent. His next to last line was “Little Chief misses his island home!” and the curvy hula-skirt-clad girl by his side asked, “Samoa?”, whereupon Little Chief grabbed at a goodies-heaped plate, dropped the Polynesian accent, and said, Texas style, “Ah don’t mahnd ef Ah DO!”

Some images uplift; some claw & dig
Some put your thoughtstream in a whirligig
Uplifting, whirling, digging–a Creator
Unleashed her Chi, then ran it through the grater
She rosined up her plate AND bow–allegro
Sustained her dark/melodic Montenegro
A g r e a t Intaglio’s an Analgesic
And fitting as Buckminstrel’s geodesic
Non-toxic seekers on the astral plane
Now find her in Orono–that’s in Maine

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I put the poem before the image because I think I was more successful with the former than the latter. There is sometimes an inverse relationship between how much I worry about a getting certain subject RIGHT and the quality of the image that results. Simply put, I tried too hard on this one, and it got out of hand.

But that’s OK, because–as I indicate in the signature line, deliberately made to look like a signature at the bottom of an intaglio print (and notice that the poem is subtly framed in what vaguely looks like the beveled plate-edge of an intaglio), that this is an a/p, which is printmakerese for “artist’s proof.” It’s another way of saying “work in progress, not yet suitable for an edition,” or “I didn’t go yet.” And indeed I hope, perhaps in my retirement years, that I’ll have access to an intaglio studio and press, and I’ll turn this crude drawing into old-school gold.

The thing is, the Intaglio process is obsolete. It was invented sometime around the 14th Century almost by accident, an offshoot of the engraving of gold with incised accents, which were then rubbed with contrasting pigment. It became a way for artists to translate one image into many salable prints. But it’s a demanding process: take a copper or zinc plate, sand off the milling marks and then polish it with jeweler’s rouge, bevel the edges so they don’t cut into the roller, and then incise the plate with an image that is the reverse of the one you want, using a burin or other engraving tool; or coat the plate with carborundum and use a carbide scribe to etch through the coating, then to be submerged in an acid bath; or put the plate in a box full of rosin dust and diffuse the dust into the air above the plate, so that it settles on the plate to become maskable tone dippable in acid–ah, it is so much more gratifying to DO these things than to describe them, but it is a real chore to learn how to do them with skill. Susan Groce has taken time and pain to translate her kaleidoscopic visions into editionable form, and for that she has my respect and admiration. She stuck to it, made a career out of it, and flourished.

And she’s taken a concern with the environment and with physical health to investigate non-toxic means of printing. A good thing, too: the print room I remember had air that was a minestrone of fumes: carborundum, burnt plate oil, kerosene, denatured alcohol, the mustiness of paper soaked too long, nitric acid–and I’m far from done; haven’t even gotten to lithography chemicals, which were in the same room. Good for her for seeking safety for herself and her contemporaries.

And good for her for her multi-talented creative soul. As I indicated in “take 1,” she is an accomplished violinist. Thus the line “She rosined up her plate AND bow–allegro” refers to the fact that both the Aquatint printmaking process and the bow of a violin require rosin. I was also glad to mention “Buckminstrel” Fuller in her sphere, as he was a like multitalent with a care for the environment and human quality of life. His notebooks and Susan’s have some overlap, and I commend both to the viewer’s attention.

I invited Susan to offer a quotation from any of her artist’s statements, or a link she’d like readers to be steered to, for me to include in the image. She graciously declined, being very busy with the Semester-End Madness aspect of her professorship. But she’s easy to find as department chair at the University of Maine at Orono, and I hope any interested parties take a look at her artwork and her benign-materials investigations.

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tableau vivant

taxes levied leveled Levi
blimey barney’s stoned but viva
eager beamers roar & win
ukuleles sound like mint

TAB LOW/WE WANT

The candidate survived the peer review
And then her father died, as if on cue
Bulimia & travel left her raw

LOVE set her world aright & flipt her shwa
Obsessing over Style & cred & thin
Will make us OVERLOOK a crucial hint

I don’t want to clutter up the post with annotation, but I will say that Bulimia and Depression seem highly correlative. Also: I think the image has good potential for snap/crackle/poppery that has not yet been realized. I did two other scan/edits that were even less successful:

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Peaceful inside; outside, glop
Evanescent crackle/pop
Route that jet to Barcelona
Craft that Lisa: first name Mona
Even fish can get a fin in
If it’s oil on Belgian linen
VIM, my dearest, needs a Spine
‘D suit a darling Clementine

The crude drawn house inside the skewed window pane hearkens back to the early early Sixties. The teacher had us draw houses; I drew three or so. I distinctly remember that the one I drew with windows and a door got a gold star. The one with windows but no door got a silver star, and the one without windows got no star at all, even though it was a faithful rendering from memory of the windowless west side of our house.

Since light takes time to travel (usually 186,000mi/sec or so but can be as slow as 32ft/sec if passing through pressurized liquid helium, so I’ve heard) all glass windows are a sort of time-machine perception portal. The light from some stars has taken a galaxy’s rotation or so to get to our naked eyes.

 

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My dad was a Gamblin’ Man, and it negatively impacted both his marriages. He also had an appreciation for the unadorned female form–impact unknown, to me at least. I have inherited both these proclivities, and have found through the school of hard knocks that the healthiest way to deal with them is to own up to them, avoid casinos (three-plus years of gambling sobriety and counting!), and love the one I’m with to the exclusion of others, physically anyway. But I still itch, and I still look, so sometimes I “own my shadow” and take a look at one or the other of them, or, in this case, both.

Here are the words to the Gritlock acrostic:

Gamblers fly high then hit the wall
Rise & shimmy & slip & fall–O
It’s a harrowing story arc
Taut with tragedy; tawdry; stark

Here are the words to the Gridluck acrostic:

Got three squares in the office pool
Righteous fare for a Looky-Lou
Idle eyeful of tawny chic
Dares not touch but he’ll take a peek

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I was at the gym, finished with my workout, and so I texted Denise: “Bayou lunch?” (I cannot resist a pun.) She answered in the affirmative, swung by and picked me up in her truck, and since I was buying I picked the place: The Schoolhouse. Sitting across from her there, with her hair uncharacteristically swept away from her beautiful brow, I was struck with a thought of a single word: “Athena.” She looked like the goddess–wise, courageous, and ready to strategize a campaign. So was planted the seed of this page.

Here are the words of the triple acrostic:

Dispensing with hist’ry & like parenthetica
Embracing a mythos & sweet sentiment
Neglectful of nine facts & thrill’d by the tenth
It is most behooving & fitful, this scene
Suggestive of battle & spillage of spleen
Emboss’d on a column & set in Helvetica

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Here is something that was thought out in advance, but executed while not feeling well. The show must go on, and I wanted to post today, but the impatience and shakiness that comes with minor illness is right there on the page. Perhaps I’ll do a do-over after I’m well. I really like the way “hand held” has come to mean something electronic, though it’s still connotative of relaxed love.

Here are the words to the double acrostic:

Holographic novelty is not quite in the flesh
And in vitro is a workaround if you’ve no crèche
NEED is forging our tomorrows but we may forestall
Datamining pseudojoy if we walk parasoled

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Here is the “finished” portrait and eponymous acrostic of Patrick Stewart. Something was lost in the finishing: freshness/likeness. Something was gained: the words that solved the poeticization.

Here are the words:

Picard is SF, so’s Prof X–he plays ’em nonetheless
And fans of Wm. S. and Sammy B. are by him blest
The savviest of thespians will not go toe to toe
Respectfully they take a pew & watch & learn & grow
Intensity is always there from starring role to extra
Comedic, tragic, bleak to brilliant thwarts the glibbest texter
King Lear, King Faud, King Kong, Candide–he’d be in all parts expert