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for certain improprieties

loose change will make a sin a breeze

in other climes and rhymes betimes

tenacity will ring your chimes. well

travelogued, your journeys; you

instinctively appoint a view/help

nested townsfolk rarefy/from

getting down to getting hi

Afterword: This whimsical down-one-side-and-up-the-other Double Acrostic is not quite nonsense; it makes a flitting sort of sense if you consider that the poem tells you with its title that it is about impulsivity. The poem came to be after it occurred to me that though the phrase “fleeting impulse” is as old hat as the phrase “old hat,” the phrase “flitting impulse” may be more apt, implying as it does quick and jerky motion rather than sudden evaporation, and yet an Internet search yields far fewer instances (but it delights me to see that there ARE such instances!) of the latter than the former.

Constructing the poem with a consistent rhyme and meter was a fun challenge. Thank Goodness for the forward-slash line break symbol that lets me break to the next line while staying on the line! 🙂

Not everyone knows that there is more than one version of Edvard Munch’s famous painting “The Scream.” In some near future, there may well end up being more than one version of this self-portrait of mine. I am not happy with the execution of this version, but there is something in the complexity of the expression on this face I’ve done that is not easy to capture. If I do recapture it, and do a better job with the presentation, this drawing will no longer be necessary and I may destroy it. Time will tell.

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mask down

meandering along this aimful road
a man may get his To mixt with his Fro
some soldier on & eddy others flow
kept secrets guarantee so much unknown

There may be a word change or two in version next-if-any: “endless” for “aimful” and/or “ebb” for “eddy.” Rhyme will tell, though Reason may not.

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“Take nothing but pictures, leave nothing but footprints.” Motto of the Baltimore Grotto, a Maryland caving club founded in 1952

Tread Marks

Toes press macadam
Rabbit tracks weave amongst the flora
EXIT signs illumine dusty footprints on the floor
And Every One of us has left our mark
Defining a path through Darkness

Rest in peace, Harold Price Bowers, Sr.
1 9 3 3   –   1 9 8 3

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Brick and Mortar, and equivalents thereof, are fine in moderation. Are we as a species moderate? An Internet search on Dubai buildings will provide a fun answer. Not that I’m knocking Dubaians and their innovative excess. If I had more money than I knew what to do with, Cutting-Edge Architecture would be a great place to throw it.

But Urban Sprawl, made possible by that “I claim this land in the name of Spain” mindset that is this-century obsolete, made of the Valley of the Sun where I grew up a fungus of humanity, spreading up and over the mountains every which way, and far beyond the Valley’s borders. “Brick & Mortar” is now recognized as a largely unnecessary venue for business. Let us move on.

Here are the words to the double acrostic, making Ands of the ampersands for the sake of clarity:

Bursting out- and upward, our explosive growth goes boom
Reaching for the brass ring’s old–we charge like raging sumo
Instant towers scrape the sky where once was merest rumor
Clearing forests calls for disregard of owl and wombat
Keeping books reduces Life to uptick and pro rata
Andes-climbing’s easier than knowing what should matter

 

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This weekend Denise and I have the pleasure of the company of Denise’s twin grandchildren. They are known colloquially as Sissy and Bubba, and they are capital-A Adorable. My drawing of them does not do them justice.

Here are the words to the double acrostic, which is a ‘strict’ acrostic, meaning the characters strings comprising each line are all of the same length.

Serene yet giggly Girl with Brother like a tiger cub
It is a duo with much to do & Mischief’s on the menu
Some days have grrs & lunacy some days a toe’ll stub
Some days are movied/Park&Recked & go without a flub
Yet Love is ALWAYS there in Twinness-Shared Continua