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2019 0721 rose rose rose rose

In the Boy Scouts, and in a human-relations camp called Anytown that I attended in June of 1971, there was a campfire song, and it’s especially compelling when sung as a round. There are at least two fine versions on YouTube, and I invite you to go from this post to a search for the video version of “Rose Red” to enhance your listening pleasure.

It has changed over the centuries. In its original form the word “marry” is short for “by the Virgin Mary” and means “yes indeed” or “of course” or “you bet.” The word “an” is an archaic way of saying “if.” “Thoult” is a contractual form of “thou wilt.” Isn’t that lovely?

“Rose, rose, rose, rose,
Will I ever see thee red?”

“Aye, marry, that thou wilt,
An thoult but stay.”

I have quoted three other Rose songs, one made popular by Nat King Cole. The Grateful Dead did a sort of sequel. But long before that was “The Yellow Rose of Texas,” which like “Rose Red” has changed over time. For its curious history see Wikipedia.

I was tempted to excerpt Dorothy Parker’s acid poem “One Perfect Rose” on the card but a) it’s not a song b) I ran out of room. (It can be argued that I had ALREADY run out of room–this is one crowded card!) But here we are in the non-image portion of this post, and herewith as a special feature is the final stanza of Ms. Parker’s poem:

Why is it no one ever sent me yet
One perfect limousine, do you suppose?
Ah no, it’s always just my luck to get
One perfect rose.

Lastly we come to the quadruple-acrostic I composed for the image:

rose rose rose rose

river, share a rarer mirror
only show soupçons of cheer. o
slip downstream to see with sighs
every petaled fettled prize

 

“In my hour of darkness, she is standing right in front of me/Speaking words of wisdom/Let It Be…” Paul McCartney

“Nada, nada, nada, nada.” Ernest Hemingway

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If Death gives me a ghastly look of uttermost disdain

I may take my immortal soul upon an Astral Plane

No Immortality’s too sure for us to be remiss

Necrology may get ourselves a sudden freakish Kiss

2019 0717 tgodc

I don’t think ghosts exist, except in our minds. This ghost-vision came from mine, but I watched it form on the index card as if I had nothing to do with it. May it upset no one.

The Ghost of David Carradine

i drew some Eyes
& they were pale
i drew some Hair
’twas long but male
i drew a Sigh
for came a Face
that WAS
a Remnant

Was

a
Trace

& i conclude
that as I wend
my mind may yield
a ghostly Friend

my room is spare
my brain is cluttered

and so a

Ghost
appeared
and
fluttered

2019 0717 brad bird

Were it not for Brad Bird, the animated versions of THE IRON GIANT and THE INCREDIBLES would not have come to be. So please be grateful to him. (There are many other reasons to be grateful. Please look him up!)

brad bead baad bard bird

beelzebub (ay carumba!) climbs a baobab
refutes saint francis of assissi
and that serpent has no cause for cheer
deluded, derided, he’d been played, by God

Some time back I posted “Long Live Myth,” but had not written the acrostic poem. Here it is:

2019 0715 long live myth

Long Live Myth

Loves and Loss loose bolts of dream
ONUS births lies steamingly
Next, evolvement writes off debt
Giving Legends depth and breadth

And here is a new card:

2019 0715 credible outcomes

Credible Outcomes

Caught a fever–you could too
Repartée becomes haiku
Endochrinal loss of tact
Drive’s a bully’s Cadillac
If a Sacred Cow says Moo
Belladonna may yet doom
Let us navigate the maze
Exiting with Caws and Brays

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For more than ten years Acrostic Poetry has been both a tool and a toy to me. Within its limitations there are unending possibilities.

Today I took a minimalist approach. What’s the smallest couplet? Two words. Is it possible to create a triple acrostic with each line a two-word couplet? Let’s see what happens when we try.

Canned Reprim&. Hierarchic Antarctic. Elysia Indonesia. Correctional Sectional. K-Rational Encyclical.

Is the use of the ampersand cheating? No, especially not nowadays. Number/symbol shorthand has been around 4ever.

Is this Poetry? Of course it is. Ten words will take an agile mind gliding into new associations–“canned reprimand” is relevant in this age of e-mail blasts, for instance–and both the heaven of Elysia and the cold hell of Antarctica are referenced. And what is an Encyclical but an all-encompassing discussion? Let’s dole it out in K-Rations to make it palatable to the soldiers of knowledge. (That’s a K-rationalization if ever there was one.)

Above all, the value of this little exploration is its newness. Certainly there are better triple-acrosticized couplets waiting to be invented (discovered?)–there may even be a QUADRUPLE-acrosticized beast, with more apt associations leading to greater insights regarding the sentient condition. I invite sentient beings, human and otherwise, to create them or to find them. Just give ol’ Johnny Acrostiseed here an acknowledging nod if you do, please. 🙂

2019 0714 infinitie catI have owned cats, and cats have owned me. I have loved women with cats, and in every instance I have loved their cats. It cannot be otherwise.

infinitie cat

insatiable creature quells the cynic
neonifies the photons to actinic
for kicks conducts an effortlessness clinic

if frisky, what a fresh bouquet of freesia
no jumps through hoops would ever so much please ya
it’s just rare times you’d wish milk of amnesia

this friendly foe’s st. francis and iscariot
it’s sometimes motel 6, sometimes the marriott
each trip though’s on a cosmic-powered chariot